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SubjectRe: [PATCH 2/2] regulator: grammar fix in Kconfig
On 07/26/2012 04:48 PM, Mark Brown wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 26, 2012 at 04:07:24PM +0200, Michael Jones wrote:
>> - constraints then the regulator core will provide an always
>> - enabled dummy regulator will be provided, allowing consumer
>> - drivers to continue.
>> + constraints, the regulator core will provide an always-
>> + enabled dummy regulator, allowing consumer drivers to continue.
> This appears to be making the grammar worse, it's just removing a "then"
> and inserting, random commas which don't make, much sense.

What I was trying to fix was the double "provide" in "will provide an...
will be provided." I agree that the if...then... was ugly, too.

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