Messages in this thread | | | Date | Thu, 19 Jul 2007 01:43:14 +0200 | From | "Jesper Juhl" <> | Subject | Re: [PATCH 1/5] HOWTO: add Japanese translation of Documentation/HOWTO |
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On 19/07/07, Greg Kroah-Hartman <gregkh@suse.de> wrote: > From: Tsugikazu Shibata <tshibata@ab.jp.nec.com> > > Add the japanese translation of the Documentation/HOWTO file. >
A few comments below.
> Signed-off-by: Tsugikazu Shibata <tshibata@ab.jp.nec.com> > Cc: IKEDA Munehiro <m-ikeda@ds.jp.nec.com> > Signed-off-by: Greg Kroah-Hartman <gregkh@suse.de> > --- > Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO | 650 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ > 1 files changed, 650 insertions(+), 0 deletions(-) > create mode 100644 Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO > > diff --git a/Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO b/Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO > new file mode 100644 > index 0000000..b2446a0 > --- /dev/null > +++ b/Documentation/ja_JP/HOWTO > @@ -0,0 +1,650 @@ > +NOTE: > +This is Japanese translated version of "Documentation/HOWTO".
I'd suggest "This is a Japanese translated version ..." or perhaps "This is a version of Documentation/HOWTO translated into Japanese".
> +This one is maintained by Tsugikazu Shibata <tshibata@ab.jp.nec.com>
I'd write "This document is maintained by ..."
> +and JF Project team <www.linux.or.jp/JF>.
"and the JF Project team ..."
> +If you find difference with original file or problem in translation,
How about "If you find any difference between this document and the original file or a problem with the translation,"
> +please contact maintainer of this file or JF project.
"please contact the maintainer ..."
> + > +Please also note that purpose of this file is easier to read for non > +English natives and not to be intended to fork. So, if you have any > +comments or updates of this file, please try to update Original(English) > +file at first.
Shouldn't this be something along the lines of "Please also note that the purpose of this file is to be easier to read for non English (read: Japanese) speakers and is not intended as a fork. So if you have any comments or updates for this file please try to update the original English file first."
<snip - can't comment on the actual Japanese text>
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