Messages in this thread | | | Date | Thu, 16 Jul 2009 10:15:43 +0100 | Subject | Re: [PATCH 2/3] connector: clean up grammar/style in documentation | From | Will Newton <> |
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On Wed, Jul 15, 2009 at 11:14 PM, Mike Frysinger<vapier@gentoo.org> wrote: > The grammar in most of this file is slightly off, and some sections are > hard to read due to lack of visual clues breaking up related material. > > Signed-off-by: Mike Frysinger <vapier@gentoo.org> > --- > Documentation/connector/connector.txt | 119 +++++++++++++++++---------------- > 1 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 58 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/connector/connector.txt b/Documentation/connector/connector.txt > index ad6e0ba..847f0d8 100644 > --- a/Documentation/connector/connector.txt > +++ b/Documentation/connector/connector.txt > @@ -5,10 +5,10 @@ Kernel Connector. > Kernel connector - new netlink based userspace <-> kernel space easy > to use communication module. > > -Connector driver adds possibility to connect various agents using > -netlink based network. One must register callback and > -identifier. When driver receives special netlink message with > -appropriate identifier, appropriate callback will be called. > +The Connector driver adds makes it easy to connect various agents using a > +netlink based network. One must register a callback and an identifier. > +When the driver receives a special netlink message with the appropriate > +identifier, the appropriate callback will be called.
The first line of the second paragraph still needs work, "adds" should probably be removed. -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-kernel" in the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html Please read the FAQ at http://www.tux.org/lkml/
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