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SubjectRe: [PATCH 2.6.18] [TRIVIAL] Spelling fixes in Documentation/DocBook
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Ar Iau, 2006-09-21 am 23:18 +0200, ysgrifennodd Michael Opdenacker:
> -<para>There's an <emphasis>ethernet</emphasis> gadget
> +<para>There's an <emphasis>Ethernet</emphasis> gadget

NAK, Ethernet is/was indeed a proper noun but it has become generic

> -and associated transciever to support <emphasis>Dual-Role</emphasis>
> +and associated transceiver to support <emphasis>Dual-Role</emphasis>

ACK

> - value which selects the corresponding interrupt decription structure
> + value which selects the corresponding interrupt description structure

ACK


> interrupt hardware and was therefore reimplemented with split
> - functionality for egde/level/simple/percpu interrupts. This is not
> + functionality for edge/level/simple/percpu interrupts. This is not

ACK - also per-cpu with hyphens ?

> - <title>The Linux Journalling API</title>
> + <title>The Linux Journaling API</title>

NAK. See previous multiple discussions.

> The preferred method of initializing structures is to use
> - designated initialisers, as defined by ISO C99, eg:
> + designated initializers, as defined by ISO C99, eg:

NAK. Policy is to keep existing language usage not Americanize nor
Anglicize.

> -you hold the lock, noone can delete the object, so you don't need to
> +you hold the lock, no one can delete the object, so you don't need to

ACK


> - support second drives on a port (such as SATA contollers) will
> + support second drives on a port (such as SATA controllers) will
> use ata_noop_dev_select().

ACK


> - Higher-level hooks, these two hooks can potentially supercede
> + Higher-level hooks, these two hooks can potentially supersede

NAK - Supercede is correct

> - ATA_QCFLAG_ACTIVE is clared from qc->flags.
> + ATA_QCFLAG_ACTIVE is cleared from qc->flags.

ACK

> - requirement during issuing or excution any ATA/ATAPI command.
> + requirement during issuing or executing any ATA/ATAPI command.

NAK. Please check changes before submission

> </para>
>
> <itemizedlist>
> @@ -951,7 +951,7 @@ and other resources, etc.
>
> <listitem>
> <para>
> - !BSY &amp;&amp; ERR after CDB tranfer starts but before the
> + !BSY &amp;&amp; ERR after CDB transfer starts but before the

ACK

> last byte of CDB is transferred. ATA/ATAPI standard states



...

Please also submit each set of changes separately


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