Messages in this thread | | | Date | Thu, 29 Jun 2006 10:22:14 -0600 | From | Grant Grundler <> | Subject | Re: [PATCH 1/6] PCI-Express AER implemetation |
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Yanmin, Just one nit...
On Thu, Jun 29, 2006 at 09:12:27AM +0800, Zhang, Yanmin wrote: > Patch 1 consists of the pciaer-howto.txt document. ... > +In existing Linux kernels, 2.4.x and 2.6.x, there is no root service > +driver available to manage the PCI Express advanced error reporting > +extended capability structure.
"existing Linux kernels" won't mean anything 3 years. You might be more specific such as "All kernels before 2.6.18 released..."
... > +To provide a solution to these BIOS issues requires the PCI Express AER > +Root driver that provides: > + > +- A mechanism for the OS and application to determine if a fatal > + error is fatal to the system, OS, or application increasing > + uptime.
The word "mechanism" is used frequently. I wonder if sometimes (like above) "infrastructure" is meant.
> +8. Frequent Asked Questions
I'd be tempted to make the FAQ the next section after the introduction.
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